Advice on my book. It's about runaways, troubled teens, love, etc.?

Okay so it's called ';Radiant Eastside on a Hazy Day';. It's bout to runaways (Brendon and Audrey) who run away to New York, both for different problems and later find they need each other. (It's from different peoples prospectives) There is another character named Aiden who already lives in NY wanting to escape it and not loving he 'city'. His best friend Meisha is in lvoe with him but he isn't so sure. He thinks he's gay. The last character is Riles (Audrey's sister) who starts seaching for her sister.





So does it sound okay? I added more problems and solutions, more characters come along but they don't have their own part. Sound Good?Advice on my book. It's about runaways, troubled teens, love, etc.?
Music,





Actually it's a pretty good idea. The way you wrote out your synopsis on here is pretty well done also. However, be careful of the easy words and the Internet Language.





For instance:





You use the word 'bout' for about. You use the word 'to' for two runaways, and the word love is incorrect with 'lvoe.'





Commas should be used here and there, but editing by someone who reads your story would fix those if they did it honestly.





Don't get hung up on that 'chat room' lingo. Spell your words out, Music. The last thing you want is a literary agent looking at the three chapters you send him/her and seeing those silly misspelled words. You'd be cutting your own throat.





Good luck!





PJ MAdvice on my book. It's about runaways, troubled teens, love, etc.?
i guess people would read that.
mmm.... it might be good with some good writing :P
you could get lots of good ideas fron that show on the N. its called Degrasi.
--禄 It seems kind of confusing. Whose point of view is it going to be told from?
if your a good writer, than it would be good. I really like the title.


If your a crappy writer, or just an okay one, you wont be able to pull it off.


Once again, kudos on the title. It's amazing.
it sound good but it seams that there is to much going on at once but it really does sound good.
Sounds pretty good. Maybe I'll buy it if it's published. :)
for me it sounds interesting let me know when u publish it cuz i will buy it for sure
It sounds ok, but maybe a little more focus on one set of the characters, it might confuse people having two story plots going on, the second one could be like a sequel. That would be cool. The the third book could be like how it all comes together!